Monday, January 15, 2018

grammaticality - Sentence structure for grammar: parallel vs. what feels natural

Are the following both grammatically correct, or is one incorrect and why? (Usage context: book, not an essay).



Original:





He erases whatever he wills, and fixes. With him is the original record.




Friend's suggestion:




He erases and fixes whatever he wills. With him is the original
record.


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