The more they sing, their burden lightens and their love deepens
As you can see, the first clause applied "the more" structure, but the second one didn't. Is it acceptable and grammatically correct to write a sentence like this? Thank.
The more they sing, their burden lightens and their love deepens
As you can see, the first clause applied "the more" structure, but the second one didn't. Is it acceptable and grammatically correct to write a sentence like this? Thank.
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