Monday, November 2, 2015

Comma use before "as"?



I'm writing an essay and I was wondering if I would put a comma here before as:




Reputation is based on integrity and wisdom as your ability to demonstrate probity would gain you favor among many people.



Answer



As adds nothing here. Get rid of it and use two separate sentences:




Reputation is based on integrity and wisdom. Your ability to demonstrate probity would gain you favor among many people.


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