Is the sentence below correct?
I want to say I can't merely rely on self-learning in order to become proficient in my career, and I need better resources.
Although self-learning is an essential factor of success for any career, I believe it isn’t enough to achieve full mastery in them.
Or do I have to say it this way:
Although self-learning is an essential factor of success for any career, I believe it isn’t enough to achieve full mastery in it.
However, as both sound a bit awkward to me, I would appreciate it if anyone could suggest me better substitutes.
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