They always complained about the school's brooms:
some of them started to vibrate if you flew too high,
some always flew to the left, some just didn't fly.
I think there is a problem in this sentence. there should be "and" before "some just didn't fly ". The sentence will be :
They always complained about the school's brooms:
some of them started to vibrate if you flew too high,
some always flew to the left, and some just didn't fly.
Am I correct or both are correct?
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