Monday, June 29, 2015

syntactic analysis - Preposition placement mid-sentence

I was recently reviewing a piece of writing for a friend of mine who wrote




Though such a theory does not describe the world we live in, it will undoubtedly shed
light on...





I told him to change this to




Though such a theory does not describe the world in which we live, it will undoubtedly shed light on...




I'm not entirely sure why I think this is correct besides the indirect evidence obtained from recalling that one is not supposed to end a sentence with a preposition.



Was I correct? Is there a general, corresponding rule? If so, what is it?

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