I have a sentence:
Ms.Cho relayed her concerns about the company's financial situation while she was having a meeting with the manager.
My friend reduced it:
Ms.Cho relayed her concerns about the company's financial situation having a meeting with the manager.
I think the word while cannot be omitted in this sentence, but he doesn't agree with me.
Is he right?
Please help me! thanks
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