Is repeating the subject twice in a sentence considered a grammar error or bad style? For example:
Epic Game Music will be held for the first time in Poland at Poznan
Game Arena and Game Industry Conference 2018 and it is planned as a
powerful and emotional opening event for...
or maybe the subject should be omitted and the sentence should go like this
Epic Game Music will be held for the first time in Poland at Poznan
Game Arena and Game Industry Conference 2018 and is planned as a
powerful and emotional opening event for
Which way is more correct and sounds better to your ear?
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