Saturday, August 8, 2015

syntax - Changing the focus of this sentence?

I'm trying to write a caption for my work Instagram account. I work for a ski holiday company and it's a photo of one of our guest's children.





Wonderful photos from Chalet Augustine guests, Mike and Anne. Their children look great in their ski suits!




The problem with what I've written is the fact the first sentence makes it sound like the photos are of them (Mike and Anne) when they are actually taken by them but the photos are of their children.

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