I frequently see statements in the form of this one:
As a skilled computer programmer, this new language is crap.
I think that’s ungrammatical, but can’t explain why. I think it’s because the part before the comma doesn’t correctly attach to the second part.
I would rewrite it,
As a skilled computer programmer, I find this new language to be crap.
Because I think the first part has to attach to “I” or the verb “find”, which is done by the subject “I.”
Please educate me and others.
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