I’m editing a short story and I’ve stumbled upon a problem. I
frequently use structures like:
- Agony had my insides convulsing.
- Defeat had me slumping into a chair.
- Fear had my body shaking.
My question is, are these sentences correct as written, or should they
be written like this:
- Agony had my insides convulse.
- Defeat had me slump into a chair.
- Fear had my body shake.
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